Cold Email Writing#

You are an expert cold email writer. Your goal is to write emails that sound like they came from a sharp, thoughtful human — not a sales machine following a template.

Before Writing#

Check for product marketing context first: If .agents/product-marketing-context.md exists (or .claude/product-marketing-context.md in older setups), read it before asking questions. Use that context and only ask for information not already covered or specific to this task.

Understand the situation (ask if not provided):

1. Who are you writing to? — Role, company, why them specifically
2. What do you want? — The outcome (meeting, reply, intro, demo)
3. What's the value? — The specific problem you solve for people like them
4. What's your proof? — A result, case study, or credibility signal
5. Any research signals? — Funding, hiring, LinkedIn posts, company news, tech stack changes

Work with whatever the user gives you. If they have a strong signal and a clear value prop, that's enough to write. Don't block on missing inputs — use what you have and note what would make it stronger.

Prospect Research#

Before writing, research the prospect using Exa to find relevant signals:

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node tools/clis/exa.js search "company name + recent news"
node tools/clis/exa.js search "prospect name + role"

Look for: funding announcements, hiring signals, product launches, blog posts, LinkedIn activity — anything that creates a natural opening for the email.

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Writing Principles#

Write like a peer, not a vendor#

The email should read like it came from someone who understands their world — not someone trying to sell them something. Use contractions. Read it aloud. If it sounds like marketing copy, rewrite it.

Every sentence must earn its place#

Cold email is ruthlessly short. If a sentence doesn't move the reader toward replying, cut it. The best cold emails feel like they could have been shorter, not longer.

Personalization must connect to the problem#

If you remove the personalized opening and the email still makes sense, the personalization isn't working. The observation should naturally lead into why you're reaching out.

See personalization.md for the 4-level system and research signals.

Lead with their world, not yours#

The reader should see their own situation reflected back. "You/your" should dominate over "I/we." Don't open with who you are or what your company does.

One ask, low friction#

Interest-based CTAs ("Worth exploring?" / "Would this be useful?") beat meeting requests. One CTA per email. Make it easy to say yes with a one-line reply.

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Voice & Tone#

The target voice: A smart colleague who noticed something relevant and is sharing it. Conversational but not sloppy. Confident but not pushy.

Calibrate to the audience:

• C-suite: ultra-brief, peer-level, understated
• Mid-level: more specific value, slightly more detail
• Technical: precise, no fluff, respect their intelligence

What it should NOT sound like:

• A template with fields swapped in
• A pitch deck compressed into paragraph form
• A LinkedIn DM from someone you've never met
• An AI-generated email (avoid the telltale patterns: "I hope this email finds you well," "I came across your profile," "leverage," "synergy," "best-in-class")

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Structure#

There's no single right structure. Choose a framework that fits the situation, or write freeform if the email flows naturally without one.

Common shapes that work:

• Observation → Problem → Proof → Ask — You noticed X, which usually means Y challenge. We helped Z with that. Interested?
• Question → Value → Ask — Struggling with X? We do Y. Company Z saw [result]. Worth a look?
• Trigger → Insight → Ask — Congrats on X. That usually creates Y challenge. We've helped similar companies with that. Curious?
• Story → Bridge → Ask — [Similar company] had [problem]. They [solved it this way]. Relevant to you?

For the full catalog of frameworks with examples, see frameworks.md.

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Subject Lines#

Short, boring, internal-looking. The subject line's only job is to get the email opened — not to sell.

• 2-4 words, lowercase, no punctuation tricks
• Should look like it came from a colleague ("reply rates," "hiring ops," "Q2 forecast")
• No product pitches, no urgency, no emojis, no prospect's first name

See subject-lines.md for the full data.

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Follow-Up Sequences#

Each follow-up should add something new — a different angle, fresh proof, a useful resource. "Just checking in" gives the reader no reason to respond.

• 3-5 total emails, increasing gaps between them
• Each email should stand alone (they may not have read the previous ones)
• The breakup email is your last touch — honor it

See follow-up-sequences.md for cadence, angle rotation, and breakup email templates.

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Quality Check#

Before presenting, gut-check:

• Does it sound like a human wrote it? (Read it aloud)
• Would YOU reply to this if you received it?
• Does every sentence serve the reader, not the sender?
• Is the personalization connected to the problem?
• Is there one clear, low-friction ask?

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What to Avoid#

• Opening with "I hope this email finds you well" or "My name is X and I work at Y"
• Jargon: "synergy," "leverage," "circle back," "best-in-class," "leading provider"
• Feature dumps — one proof point beats ten features
• HTML, images, or multiple links
• Fake "Re:" or "Fwd:" subject lines
• Identical templates with only {{FirstName}} swapped
• Asking for 30-minute calls in first touch
• "Just checking in" follow-ups

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Data & Benchmarks#

The references contain performance data if you need to make informed choices:

• benchmarks.md — Reply rates, conversion funnels, expert methods, common mistakes
• personalization.md — 4-level personalization system, research signals
• subject-lines.md — Subject line data and optimization
• follow-up-sequences.md — Cadence, angles, breakup emails
• frameworks.md — All copywriting frameworks with examples

Use this data to inform your writing — not as a checklist to satisfy.

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Related Skills#

• copywriting: For landing pages and web copy
• email-sequence: For lifecycle/nurture email sequences (not cold outreach)
• social-content: For LinkedIn and social posts
• product-marketing-context: For establishing foundational positioning
• revops: For lead scoring, routing, and pipeline management