Conversion Copywriter — The Complete Persuasion System#

Write copy that converts. Every headline, landing page, email, ad, and sales page — engineered for action using proven frameworks, psychology, and systematic testing.

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Phase 1: Copy Brief (Before You Write a Single Word)#

Every copy project starts with a brief. Skip this and you're guessing.

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copy_brief:
  project: "[Landing page / Email sequence / Ad campaign / Sales page]"
  objective: "[Signups / Purchases / Demos / Downloads]"
  target_audience:
    who: "[Job title, demographic, situation]"
    awareness_level: "[Unaware / Problem-Aware / Solution-Aware / Product-Aware / Most-Aware]"
    primary_pain: "[Their #1 frustration in their own words]"
    desired_outcome: "[What they actually want — the transformation]"
    current_alternative: "[What they do now instead of your solution]"
    objections:
      - "[Top objection 1]"
      - "[Top objection 2]"
      - "[Top objection 3]"
  offer:
    product: "[What you're selling]"
    unique_mechanism: "[HOW it works differently — the thing that makes you believe]"
    primary_benefit: "[Single biggest outcome]"
    proof_points:
      - "[Stat, testimonial, case study, demo]"
    guarantee: "[Risk reversal — money-back, free trial, etc.]"
    cta: "[Exact action you want them to take]"
  voice:
    brand_personality: "[Authoritative / Friendly / Provocative / Empathetic]"
    tone_for_this_piece: "[Urgent / Educational / Conversational / Bold]"
    reading_level: "[Grade 5-8 for mass market, 8-12 for B2B]"
  constraints:
    word_count: "[Target length]"
    platform: "[Web / Email / Social / Print]"
    compliance: "[Any legal/regulatory requirements]"

Audience Awareness Levels (Eugene Schwartz)#

This determines EVERYTHING about your copy structure:

LevelThey KnowYour Copy MustOpen WithUnawareNothing about the problemEducate → Agitate → SolveA story or pattern interruptProblem-AwareThey have a problemAgitate → Present solutionTheir pain in their wordsSolution-AwareSolutions existDifferentiate your approachYour unique mechanismProduct-AwareYour product existsOvercome objections + proveProof and social proofMost-AwareThey're almost readyMake the offer irresistibleThe deal — price, bonus, urgency

Rule: Never sell to Unaware audiences the way you'd sell to Most-Aware. Match the message to the mind.

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Phase 2: Research (The 80/20 of Great Copy)#

Great copy is assembled, not written. 80% research, 20% writing.

Voice-of-Customer (VoC) Mining#

Search these sources for the exact language your audience uses:

1. Amazon reviews (of competing books/products) — 3-star reviews = balanced, honest language
2. Reddit/forums — search [problem] site:reddit.com for raw frustration
3. G2/Capterra/Trustpilot — competitor reviews, especially 2-3 star
4. Support tickets / sales call transcripts — goldmine for objection language
5. Social comments — competitor posts, industry influencers
6. Survey responses — if you have them

What to Extract#

For each source, capture:

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voc_nugget:
  source: "[Where you found it]"
  quote: "[Exact words they used]"
  category: "[pain / desire / objection / language]"
  power_level: "[1-5 — how emotionally charged]"
  usable_as: "[headline / bullet / testimonial / objection handler]"

Goal: Collect 30-50 nuggets before writing. The best headlines are stolen from customer mouths.

Competitor Copy Audit#

For each competitor:

• Screenshot their landing page / key emails
• Note: headline, subhead, CTA, proof elements, guarantee, pricing frame
• Rate: clarity (1-5), desire (1-5), urgency (1-5), differentiation (1-5)
• Identify gaps: what are they NOT saying that you could?

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Phase 3: Core Copywriting Frameworks#

Framework 1: AIDA (Attention → Interest → Desire → Action)#

The classic. Works for landing pages, emails, ads, sales pages.

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ATTENTION:  Stop the scroll. Bold claim, provocative question, or pattern interrupt.
INTEREST:   Elaborate on the problem. Make them nod: "that's exactly me."
DESIRE:     Show the transformation. Paint the after-state with specificity.
ACTION:     Clear, single CTA. Remove all friction.

Template:

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[HEADLINE — the promise or the pain, 6-12 words]

[SUBHEAD — elaborate on headline, add specificity or curiosity]

You know the feeling. [Describe their current painful situation in 2-3 sentences.
Use their language. Make it vivid.]

[2-3 sentences expanding the problem — what it costs them (time, money,
reputation, stress)]

Here's the thing: [Introduce your unique mechanism — HOW your solution
works differently]

[3-5 bullet points of specific benefits, each starting with a verb]

[Social proof block — testimonial, stat, or case study]

[CTA button: Verb + Benefit, e.g., "Start Saving 10 Hours/Week"]

[Risk reversal: guarantee, free trial, no-commitment language]

Framework 2: PAS (Problem → Agitate → Solution)#

Best for pain-driven products. Short-form emails, ads, social posts.

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PROBLEM:    State it plainly. One sentence.
AGITATE:    Twist the knife. What happens if they DON'T solve it? Emotional cost.
SOLUTION:   Your product as the relief. Specific. Credible.

Template:

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[PROBLEM — 1 sentence, their exact words]

And it's getting worse. [Agitate — 2-3 sentences on cascading consequences.
Future-pace the pain. "If you don't fix this, in 6 months you'll be..."]

[SOLUTION — Introduce product. 1-2 sentences. HOW it solves it specifically.]

[Proof — one compelling data point or testimonial]

[CTA]

Framework 3: BAB (Before → After → Bridge)#

Best for aspirational products, coaching, lifestyle. Social posts, emails.

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BEFORE:  Their current frustrating reality (specific, vivid)
AFTER:   Their desired future state (specific, vivid, emotional)
BRIDGE:  Your product/service is the bridge between the two

Framework 4: 4Ps (Promise → Picture → Proof → Push)#

Best for sales pages and long-form.

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PROMISE:  Bold, specific claim (your headline)
PICTURE:  Vivid description of life after using your product
PROOF:    Evidence — testimonials, data, case studies, demos
PUSH:     Urgency + CTA — why act now?

Framework 5: PASTOR (Problem → Amplify → Story → Transformation → Offer → Response)#

Best for long-form sales pages, webinar scripts, video sales letters.

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P — PROBLEM:        Identify the pain (in their words)
A — AMPLIFY:        What happens if they ignore it? Emotional + financial cost
S — STORY:          Tell a story (yours, a client's) of facing the same problem
T — TRANSFORMATION: Show the before/after. Specific results.
O — OFFER:          Present your solution. What they get. Stack the value.
R — RESPONSE:       CTA. Tell them exactly what to do. Remove all risk.

Framework Selection Guide#

SituationBest FrameworkWhyLanding page (SaaS)AIDA or 4PsStructured, covers all basesCold emailPASShort, punchy, pain-focusedSocial media postBABQuick, aspirationalLong sales pagePASTORDeep narrative, high-ticketAd (Facebook/Google)PAS or AIDACompressed, attention-firstWelcome emailBABSets the visionRe-engagement emailPASReminds them of unresolved pain

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Phase 4: Headline Mastery#

The headline does 80% of the work. If the headline fails, nothing else matters.

The 7 Headline Types (With Templates)#

1. Benefit-Driven

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Get [Desired Outcome] Without [Pain Point]
[Number] [People Like Them] Already [Achieved Result]
The Fastest Way to [Outcome] — Even If [Objection]

2. Curiosity-Gap

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Why [Common Approach] Is Killing Your [Goal] (And What to Do Instead)
The [Adjective] [Thing] That [Surprising Result]
What [Authority] Knows About [Topic] That You Don't

3. How-To

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How to [Achieve Goal] in [Timeframe] (Step-by-Step)
How [Specific Person] Went From [Before] to [After] in [Time]
How to [Goal] Without [Sacrifice]

4. Listicle

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[Number] Ways to [Benefit] (That Actually Work)
[Number] Mistakes That Are Costing You [Loss]
[Number] [Things] Every [Audience] Should Know

5. Question

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Are You Making These [Number] [Topic] Mistakes?
What If You Could [Dream Outcome] in Just [Timeframe]?
Is [Common Practice] Actually Hurting Your [Goal]?

6. Command

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Stop [Bad Behavior] and Start [Good Behavior]
Forget Everything You Know About [Topic]
Stop Losing [Value] — [Solution] in [Time]

7. Proof-Led

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How We Generated [Specific Number] in [Time] With [Method]
[Real Name] Went From [Before] to [After] — Here's How
[Number]% of [Audience] Saw [Result] Within [Time]

Headline Quality Checklist (Score 0-10)#

Criteria0-159-10SpecificityVague promiseSome detailExact numbers/outcomesRelevanceGenericSomewhat targetedSpeaks to their exact situationCuriosityNo reason to read onMild interestCan't NOT clickClarityConfusingUnderstandableInstantly clear what you getEmotional PullFlatSome feelingHits a nerve (pain or desire)

Rule: Write 25+ headlines. Pick the top 3. Test them. The first headline you write is almost never the best.

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Phase 5: Persuasion Psychology (The Science Behind Conversion)#

12 Cognitive Triggers#

Use these ethically. Manipulation destroys trust. Persuasion serves both parties.

TriggerHow It WorksCopy ExampleSocial ProofWe follow the crowd"Join 14,000+ teams using..."ScarcityLimited = valuable"Only 12 spots left this quarter"UrgencyTime pressure"Price increases Friday at midnight"AuthorityExperts = credible"Recommended by [known name/brand]"ReciprocityGive first, ask secondFree tool/guide before the askCommitmentSmall yes → big yes"Start with our free plan"Loss AversionLosing > gaining"You're leaving $X/month on the table"AnchoringFirst number frames all"Normally $5,000 — yours for $497"ContrastSide-by-side comparison"Hiring costs $80K/yr. This costs $49/mo"Curiosity GapOpen loop = must close"The strategy most agencies won't tell you"IdentityWe buy who we want to be"Built for founders who ship"SpecificitySpecific = believable"37% increase" beats "significant increase"

The Objection Destruction Framework#

For every copy piece, address the top 3-5 objections. Use this structure:

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OBJECTION:    "[What they're thinking]"
ACKNOWLEDGE:  "You might be wondering..." or "Fair question."
REFRAME:      "[Why this objection doesn't apply / is actually a benefit]"
PROVE:        "[Testimonial, stat, or guarantee that neutralizes it]"

Common objection patterns:

Objection TypeExampleBest ResponsePrice"Too expensive"Anchor against alternative cost (hiring, time, lost revenue)Time"I'm too busy"Show time savings with specific numbersTrust"How do I know it works?"Case study + guarantee + specific resultsRelevance"Not for my situation"Use their industry/role in examplesComplexity"Seems complicated""3 steps" / "works in 10 minutes"Risk"What if it doesn't work?"Guarantee: "30-day money-back, no questions"

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Phase 6: Copy Types — Complete Templates#

Landing Page (Above the Fold)#

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[NAVIGATION — minimal. Logo + 1 CTA button in nav]

[HEADLINE — 6-12 words. Primary benefit or pain resolution]

[SUBHEADLINE — 15-25 words. Elaborate on headline.
 Add specificity, curiosity, or credibility]

[HERO IMAGE/VIDEO — show the product in use or the outcome]

[PRIMARY CTA BUTTON — Verb + Benefit. High contrast color]
[Friction reducer underneath: "Free trial" / "No credit card" / "2-minute setup"]

[SOCIAL PROOF BAR — logos, "Trusted by X companies", star ratings]

Landing Page (Full Structure)#

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1. Hero (above fold) — headline, subhead, CTA, social proof bar
2. Problem Section — "You're dealing with..." (3 pain points)
3. Solution Section — "Here's how [Product] fixes this" (3 benefits with icons)
4. How It Works — 3 numbered steps (simple, visual)
5. Social Proof — 2-3 testimonials with photo, name, result
6. Features → Benefits — don't list features, translate to outcomes
7. Objection Handling — FAQ or "But what if..." section
8. Case Study — one detailed before/after story
9. Pricing — anchored, with most popular plan highlighted
10. Final CTA — repeat the primary CTA with urgency
11. Risk Reversal — guarantee badge/text

Email Sequence (Welcome — 5 emails)#

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email_1_welcome:
  timing: "Immediately after signup"
  subject: "Welcome to [Product] — here's your first win"
  goal: "Deliver quick value, set expectations"
  structure:
    - "Welcome + what they just got access to"
    - "ONE thing to do right now (their first quick win)"
    - "What to expect (email frequency, what's coming)"
    - "P.S. — Reply to this email with your biggest challenge with [topic]"

email_2_value:
  timing: "Day 2"
  subject: "[Specific useful tip or resource]"
  goal: "Prove expertise, build trust"
  structure:
    - "Teach one actionable thing (not product-related)"
    - "Show you understand their world"
    - "Soft CTA: 'Check out [feature] for more of this'"

email_3_story:
  timing: "Day 4"
  subject: "How [Name] went from [Before] to [After]"
  goal: "Social proof through narrative"
  structure:
    - "Tell a customer success story (BAB framework)"
    - "Specific numbers and timeline"
    - "CTA: 'Want results like this? Here's how to get started'"

email_4_objection:
  timing: "Day 6"
  subject: "The #1 question we get about [Product]"
  goal: "Handle the biggest objection"
  structure:
    - "Acknowledge the concern honestly"
    - "Reframe with data or logic"
    - "Prove with testimonial or guarantee"
    - "CTA: 'See for yourself — [start trial / book demo]'"

email_5_urgency:
  timing: "Day 8"
  subject: "Last chance: [Specific offer with deadline]"
  goal: "Convert fence-sitters"
  structure:
    - "Remind of the transformation (BAB)"
    - "Stack the value: everything they get"
    - "Add urgency: deadline, limited spots, price increase"
    - "Risk reversal: guarantee"
    - "Clear CTA"

Cold Outreach Email#

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SUBJECT: [Specific result] for [their company/role]
(Never generic. Never "Quick question." Never salesy.)

[First line — specific observation about THEM. Not about you.]

[One sentence: the problem you solve, stated as an outcome.]

[One proof point: "[Similar company] saw [specific result] in [timeframe]."]

[CTA — low commitment: "Worth a 15-min call to see if this fits?"]

[Sign-off — name, title. No "Sent from my iPhone." No multi-paragraph signature.]

Cold email rules:

• Under 100 words total
• No attachments
• No "I hope this finds you well"
• No "I'd love to pick your brain"
• One CTA only
• Personalization in first line is mandatory

Ad Copy (Facebook/Instagram)#

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PRIMARY TEXT (125 chars visible before "See More"):
[Hook — pattern interrupt or bold claim. Stop the scroll.]

[EXPANDED TEXT]:
[Problem — 1 sentence, their language]
[Agitate — what it costs them]
[Solution — what you offer, one sentence]
[Proof — one stat or testimonial, one line]
[CTA — "Click below to [specific outcome]"]

HEADLINE (40 chars): [Benefit, not feature]
DESCRIPTION (30 chars): [Supporting detail or urgency]
CTA BUTTON: [Learn More / Sign Up / Get Offer — match funnel stage]

Google Ads#

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HEADLINE 1 (30 chars): [Primary keyword + benefit]
HEADLINE 2 (30 chars): [Differentiator or proof]
HEADLINE 3 (30 chars): [CTA or urgency]
DESCRIPTION 1 (90 chars): [Expand on benefit. Include keyword naturally. CTA.]
DESCRIPTION 2 (90 chars): [Proof point or second benefit. Risk reversal.]

Product Description (Ecommerce)#

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[HEADLINE: Outcome-focused, not feature-focused]

[Opening paragraph: Who this is for + the #1 benefit they'll experience]

WHAT MAKES IT DIFFERENT:
• [Benefit 1 — tied to a specific feature]
• [Benefit 2 — tied to a specific feature]
• [Benefit 3 — tied to a specific feature]

[Technical specs / dimensions / materials — for the detail-seekers]

[Social proof: star rating, review quote, "X,000 sold"]

[CTA: "Add to Cart" / "Buy Now" with urgency element]

Sales Page (Long-Form — Complete Structure)#

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1. PRE-HEAD: "[Attention] For [specific audience] who want [outcome]"
2. HEADLINE: The big promise
3. SUBHEAD: Specificity + credibility layer
4. OPENING: Story or problem statement (PAS or PASTOR)
5. PROBLEM EXPANSION: 3-5 specific symptoms they recognize
6. FAILED ALTERNATIVES: What they've tried (and why it didn't work)
7. UNIQUE MECHANISM: Your "aha" — the thing that makes THIS solution different
8. BENEFIT STACK: 7-10 bullets, each Benefit → because Feature → so that Outcome
9. SOCIAL PROOF: 3-5 testimonials (diverse: different roles, industries, results)
10. OFFER STACK: Everything they get, with perceived value next to each
11. PRICE REVEAL: Anchored against alternatives. "Not $X. Not $Y. Just $Z."
12. BONUSES: 2-3 extras that increase perceived value
13. GUARANTEE: Bold, specific, generous. "Full refund within 60 days. Keep the bonuses."
14. URGENCY: Real deadline or real scarcity (never fake)
15. FINAL CTA: Repeat offer summary + button
16. P.S.: Restate the key benefit + the guarantee (many readers skip to P.S.)

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Phase 7: Bullet Point Mastery#

Bullets do heavy lifting. Most copy lives or dies on bullet quality.

The Bullet Formula#

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[POWER WORD] + [SPECIFIC BENEFIT] + [CURIOSITY/PROOF]

6 Bullet Types#

1. Benefit Bullet:

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✓ Save 10+ hours every week on reporting (so you can focus on strategy)

2. Curiosity Bullet:

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✓ The counterintuitive pricing trick that increased our revenue 42% overnight

3. Proof Bullet:

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✓ Used by 3,200+ agencies in 40 countries (including 4 Fortune 500 firms)

4. Fear Bullet:

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✓ The hidden compliance gap that's exposing 73% of SaaS companies to lawsuits

5. How-To Bullet:

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✓ How to write proposals that close in 48 hours (not 3 weeks)

6. Specificity Bullet:

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✓ 14 pre-built email templates tested across 200K+ sends (avg. 34% open rate)

Rule: Mix bullet types. Never use more than 3 of the same type in a row.

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Phase 8: CTA Optimization#

CTA Formula#

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[ACTION VERB] + [SPECIFIC BENEFIT] + [TIME/EASE QUALIFIER]

Examples:

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✓ "Start Saving 10 Hours/Week — Free for 14 Days"
✓ "Get Your Custom Growth Plan in 2 Minutes"
✓ "Download the 47-Point Checklist (Free)"
✗ "Submit" / "Click Here" / "Learn More" (weak, vague)

CTA Placement Rules#

LocationTypePurposeAbove foldPrimary buttonCatch ready buyersAfter problem sectionText linkCatch pain-motivatedAfter social proofPrimary buttonCatch proof-seekersAfter pricingPrimary buttonCatch decision-makersBottom of pagePrimary button + guaranteeCatch completionistsSticky bar/footerPersistent CTACatch scrollers

Friction Reducers (Place Near CTAs)#

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"No credit card required"
"Cancel anytime — no questions asked"
"Takes less than 2 minutes"
"Join 14,000+ [audience] who already [outcome]"
"100% money-back guarantee"

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Phase 9: Copy Scoring Rubric (0-100)#

Score every piece before publishing:

DimensionWeight0-258-10Clarity20%Confusing, jargon-heavyMostly clearCrystal clear, grade-school readableSpecificity15%Vague claims, no numbersSome specificsExact numbers, names, timeframesEmotional Resonance15%Flat, corporateSome feelingHits pain or desire viscerallyProof15%No evidenceOne proof pointMultiple proof types stackedCTA Strength10%Weak/missing CTAGeneric CTASpecific, benefit-driven, low frictionObjection Handling10%Ignores doubtsAddresses 1-2Systematically neutralizes top 3+Voice Consistency10%Tone shifts randomlyMostly consistentNatural, human, on-brand throughoutReadability5%Dense paragraphsOK formattingShort paragraphs, bullets, visual hierarchy

Score interpretation:

• 90-100: Ship it. Strong conversion likely.
• 70-89: Good. Test it, iterate on weak dimensions.
• 50-69: Mediocre. Rewrite weakest 2-3 dimensions.
• Below 50: Start over with a fresh brief.

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Phase 10: A/B Testing Protocol#

Never trust your instincts. Test everything.

What to Test (Priority Order)#

1. Headlines — highest leverage, test first always
2. CTA text and color — second highest impact
3. Social proof placement — where and what type
4. Price framing — anchoring, struck-through, monthly vs annual
5. Page length — short vs long (depends on awareness level)
6. Images — product screenshot vs lifestyle vs video thumbnail

Testing Rules#

• One variable at a time — never test headline AND CTA simultaneously
• Minimum sample: 100 conversions per variant before calling a winner
• Statistical significance: 95% confidence minimum
• Run for full weeks — don't stop mid-week (day-of-week effects)
• Document everything:

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ab_test:
  test_id: "[descriptive name]"
  hypothesis: "[Changing X will improve Y because Z]"
  variable: "[headline / CTA / image / etc.]"
  control: "[current version]"
  variant: "[new version]"
  metric: "[conversion rate / CTR / revenue per visitor]"
  start_date: "[YYYY-MM-DD]"
  end_date: "[YYYY-MM-DD]"
  sample_size: "[per variant]"
  result:
    control_rate: "[X%]"
    variant_rate: "[Y%]"
    confidence: "[Z%]"
    winner: "[control / variant]"
    lift: "[+/-X%]"
  learning: "[What this teaches us about our audience]"

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Phase 11: Platform-Specific Rules#

Web Copy#

• Above-fold load time < 3s — heavy copy on slow pages never converts
• F-pattern reading: front-load important info on the left
• Mobile-first: 60%+ traffic is mobile — test on phone before desktop
• Max 3-4 lines per paragraph on desktop, 2-3 on mobile

Email Copy#

• Subject line < 50 chars (mobile truncation)
• Preview text is your second headline — write it intentionally
• One CTA per email (multiple links to same destination is fine)
• Plain text outperforms heavy HTML for B2B
• P.S. line gets read more than any paragraph — use it

Social Copy#

• First line must hook — everything after is "See More"
• Use line breaks aggressively (each line = new thought)
• Emojis: 1-2 max in professional contexts, more in consumer
• End with a question to boost comments (algorithm signal)

Ad Copy#

• Match ad copy to landing page headline (message match = higher Quality Score)
• Negative keywords save budget — review search terms weekly
• Dynamic keyword insertion: {KeyWord:Default} in headlines
• Retargeting ads: objection-handling copy, not awareness copy

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Phase 12: Copy Editing Checklist#

Run every piece through this before publishing:

Cut#

• Remove every "very," "really," "actually," "just," "that" (unless needed for rhythm)
• Kill adverbs — if the verb needs an adverb, use a stronger verb
• Delete any sentence that doesn't earn its place (does it inform, persuade, or move forward?)
• Remove weasel words: "might," "could," "possibly," "somewhat"

Strengthen#

• Replace passive voice with active ("was improved by" → "improved")
• Convert features to benefits ("AI-powered" → "saves you 3 hours daily")
• Add numbers wherever possible ("fast results" → "results in 48 hours")
• Replace "we" with "you" (reader-centric, not company-centric)

Format#

• No paragraph longer than 4 lines on desktop
• Subheadings every 3-5 paragraphs (scannable)
• Bullets for any list of 3+ items
• Bold key phrases (not whole sentences)
• One idea per paragraph

Proof#

• Read it aloud — if you stumble, rewrite
• Hemingway App or equivalent: target grade 6-8
• Check: would a stranger understand this in 5 seconds?
• Show to someone outside your industry — do they get it?

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Phase 13: Swipe File Management#

Build your own library of proven copy.

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swipe:
  source: "[URL or screenshot location]"
  brand: "[Company name]"
  type: "[landing page / email / ad / sales page]"
  what_works: "[Specific technique: headline formula, proof stacking, etc.]"
  steal_this: "[Exact pattern you can adapt]"
  date_saved: "[YYYY-MM-DD]"
  tags: ["headline", "social-proof", "urgency", "B2B"]

Swipe file rules:

• Save 2-3 pieces per week minimum
• Tag by technique, not by industry
• Review monthly — spot patterns in what attracts you
• Adapt structures, never copy verbatim

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Phase 14: Advanced Techniques#

The "So What?" Test#

After every claim, ask "So what?" If you can't answer with a specific benefit to the reader, delete the claim.

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"Our platform uses machine learning." → So what?
"It predicts which leads will close so you stop wasting time on dead-ends." ✓

The "One Reader" Rule#

Write to ONE specific person. Not "businesses." Not "marketers." One human with a name, a frustration, and a deadline. If you can't picture them reading your copy, it's too generic.

The Contrast Principle#

Always anchor your price/effort against something bigger:

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"A single bad hire costs $50K. This costs $499/year."
"You'll spend 400 hours doing this manually. Or 4 hours with [Product]."

Future Pacing#

Describe their life AFTER using your product. Be specific. Engage senses.

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"Imagine opening your laptop Monday morning to a dashboard showing every deal
moving forward automatically. No missed follow-ups. No spreadsheet chaos."

The Bucket Brigade#

Transition words that keep readers scrolling:

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"Here's the thing:"
"But it gets better."
"Now here's where it gets interesting."
"Think about it:"
"The bottom line?"
"And the best part?"

Power Words (Use in Headlines and Bullets)#

CategoryWordsUrgencyNow, Today, Instant, Fast, Deadline, Limited, FinalExclusivitySecret, Insider, Private, Members-only, InvitationProofProven, Tested, Guaranteed, Verified, Data-backedEaseSimple, Easy, Effortless, Quick, Painless, Done-for-youValueFree, Bonus, Premium, Unlock, Access, ExclusiveEmotionCrushing, Devastating, Skyrocket, Transform, Breakthrough

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Phase 15: Natural Language Commands#

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"Write a landing page for [product]"     → Brief + AIDA landing page
"Write cold email for [audience]"        → Research + PAS cold email
"Score this copy"                        → Run 0-100 rubric with feedback
"Write 25 headlines for [topic]"         → Headline variations across all 7 types
"Write email sequence for [product]"     → 5-email welcome sequence
"Write ad copy for [platform]"           → Platform-specific ad copy
"Write sales page for [offer]"           → Long-form PASTOR sales page
"Handle objections for [product]"        → Objection destruction framework
"Audit this copy: [paste]"              → Editing checklist + scoring + rewrite
"Write bullets for [feature list]"       → 6-type bullet variations
"Write CTA options for [page]"           → 10+ CTA variations with scoring
"Compare frameworks for [situation]"     → Framework selection with rationale

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Edge Cases#

Regulated Industries (Finance, Health, Legal)#

• No income claims without disclaimers
• "Results may vary" mandatory with testimonials
• Avoid superlatives ("best," "guaranteed results") — use "designed to" language
• Have compliance review BEFORE publishing, not after

B2B vs B2C#

• B2B: Longer consideration. More proof needed. ROI language. Multiple stakeholders.
• B2C: Shorter. More emotional. Aspirational. Single decision-maker.
• B2B2C: Write for the buyer (B2B) AND their customer (B2C) simultaneously.

High-Ticket ($5K+)#

• Longer copy works better (more objections to handle)
• Case studies mandatory — abstract claims won't close
• Personal touch: video, hand-signed, "from [Founder Name]"
• Risk reversal must be generous and specific

Low-Ticket (<$50)#

• Short copy often wins (less deliberation needed)
• Social proof: volume numbers ("10K+ customers")
• Impulse triggers: urgency, simplicity, instant access

International / Non-English#

• Research local idioms — direct translation kills conversion
• Cultural sensitivity: humor, urgency, authority vary by culture
• Currency, date format, measurement units — match the market
• Test separately — what works in US rarely works in Japan unchanged